An eating
disorder is any range of physiological disorders characterized by abnormal or
disturbed eating habits, such as anorexia nervosa. In today's society, it is
not surprising that eating disorders are increasing because woman are obsessed with
the pursuit of thinness.
Media creates unrealistic images of
woman, causing 55% of woman who are normal view themselves as fat. It is almost
impossible to watch TV or read a magazine that doesn't show a famous celebrity
who is slender and thin. In fact, many magazines create computer-modified
images of skinny woman. A People
magazine survey showed that 80% of females feel that woman in movies and
television programs made them feel insecure about their bodies.
All of this media exposure causes
woman to resort to starving, vomiting, or only eating diet foods to become
thin. One in three woman happen to be on diets. Some people don't even eat at all, which is
called anorexia nervosa. 9/10 of the people who diet, starve, or self-purge are
high school juniors. However, only 1/10 of these people are overweight.
Although, many would argue that body
image does not have an effect on eating disorders. Some would say that Post
Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD) is what leads to eating disorders. Traumatic
events can engage in eating disorders to self-manage the feelings and
experiences related to PTSD. For example, sexual abuse. 30% of people with an
eating disorder have been sexually abused. Sexual abuse leads to body shame
which triggers habits geared to destroying the body, meaning starvation,
purging, and binge eating.
There's a wide range of eating
disorders; whether it's anorexia nervosa, bulimia nervosa, binge eating, etc.
All of very dangerous and harmful to the body. In today's society, people
strive to attain the ideal body image that's set for us. However, no number on
a scale defines who you are as a person.
Lol, dude this is rough. I like the general direction you're going for, but don't forget to add your resources after the statistics.
ReplyDeleteYour introduction is very weak, there is not enough back info on your topic and subtopic before stating your thesis. You need to provide more reasoning(your opinion) on the facts and the topic. You have facts but none of it is discussed or talked about. Conclusion is also very weak you need to summarize essay, restate thesis and then give lasting ideas. AS(2-)
ReplyDeleteI understand what you are trying to say in the article but I feel you could make your a little bit more clear. In the conclusion you kind of didn't summarize what you are saying in your essay and if you could restate your thesis. Overall your essay idea is good but if you could just make what you are saying.
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