I'm adventurous and courageous.
I enjoy going to new places,
experiencing new things,
and having fun.
I was adored by many.
I was everyone's best friend.
In fact,
I was Andy's favorite.
But,
I wanted more than that.
I wanted to feel
like a hero.
I wanted to make a difference.
But I wasn't like the others.
I wasn't good enough,
talented enough,
smart enough.
I just wasn't enough.
The others thought I was incredible.
I mean, aren't I?
But who am I to think.
I could never be as marvelous
as Andy made me
feel.
I wanted to feel
like a hero.
I wanted to make a difference-
to be the difference.
The poem just seems to be lacking in information overall when speaking about you. You need to talk more about you and what your personal story is, the poem just seems to be all about your allusion which you try to connect to you. Please provide more. MS(3-)
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ReplyDeletemake sure you talk about yourself and not just woody
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