The place that I go to when I'm stressed out would have to be my be my bedroom window at night, where I'm able to let my negative emotions be set free. Whenever I stare outside of my bedroom window at night, my eyes always seem to wander off into the distance. I stare at the city lights and all my emotions just come out. My bedroom window is where I can go to whenever I'm depressed, mad, or when I feel like giving up. It gives me motivation to keep going. It makes me feel like, for once, I finally belong somewhere. When I stare out my bedroom window, into the night sky, I feel as if I'm myself. I don't need to impress anyone, act a certain way, or be someone who I'm not. My bedroom window has always been there for me. From my most depressing nights, to my most happiest, it has always been there.
I like the emotion in your draft. I could really feel how you felt. You should add a memory you've had in that place. Overall good job, ugly.
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